Clarity
Clarity is treated as a talent for writing. On a team it is a set of decisions about what to leave out, and the people who make them save everyone else hours a week.
Decisions about what to leave out
Clarity is treated as a writing talent, which makes it sound innate. On a team it is a set of decisions: lead with the answer, name the owner and the date, remove the paragraph that was there to show the work.
Each of those decisions costs the author something, usually the evidence that they were thorough, and saves every reader a few minutes. Across a team that is hours a week.
Measure it by its effects
Clarity is easiest to recognise by what it produced. A thread that ended with one sentence. The board asking about the recommendation instead of the background. Whoever started on Monday following the page unaided.
Quote the sentence that did it. The author often does not know which one worked.
How you would know
- Leads with the decision
Puts the answer in the first line and the reasoning underneath.
- Names the owner and the date
Ends the message with who is doing what by when.
- Cuts what does not help
Removes the paragraph that was there to show the work.
- Explains it to the newest person
Writes for the colleague who joined last week, and so for everyone.
6 messages that name it
Your incident update was four lines: what broke, who it affected, what we are doing, when the next update is. The customer forwarded it to their own team as an example.
ManagerThe structure is quoted, and the external reaction is the evidence.
Thank you for the proposal that fits on one page. The last three on this topic were twelve, and this is the first one that got a decision.
PeerLength compared, outcome named.
You ended the thread with “Dana owns this, decision by Friday” and the thread ended. That sentence is worth more than the forty messages above it.
ManagerNames the exact line that did the work.
You rewrote the onboarding page so that a person who started on Monday could follow it. The person who started on Monday did.
PeerWritten for the newest reader, tested by one.
Priya cut the six slides of background and opened with the recommendation. The board had questions about the recommendation, which had never happened before.
ManagerWhat was removed, and what that produced.
Thanks for the summary at the top of the analysis. Half the company read the summary and made the right call; the other half read the analysis and agreed.
PeerClarity serving two audiences at once.
What its absence looks like
Where clarity is absent, decisions are buried in paragraph four, threads end without an owner, and every document is long enough to prove its author was busy.
Recognising it well
Quote the line. Clarity is often one sentence, “Dana owns this, decision by Friday”, and quoting it tells the person exactly what worked.
Recognise what was cut. The six slides of background that were removed are the work; the recommendation that remained is the result.
Measure it by the newest reader. If the person who started on Monday could follow it, say so, because that is the only test that counts.
Questions people ask
- What does clarity mean as a company value?
Saying the one thing the reader needs, in the order they need it, and leaving out the material that would have demonstrated effort. It is a set of choices about omission and order rather than a gift for prose, and those choices can be observed and recognised.
- How do you recognise clarity at work?
Quote the sentence or the structure that worked, and name what it produced: a thread that ended, the board asking about the recommendation, one customer forwarding the update. Clarity is easiest to recognise by its effects.
- Is clarity the same as being brief?
No. Brevity is a common result. Clarity is the reader getting what they need at the point they need it, which sometimes means a longer document with the summary at the top.
- Why is clarity rarely recognised?
Because it looks like the absence of effort. A one-page proposal appears to have taken less work than a twelve-page one, when it usually took more, and the extra work was all in deciding what to remove.
Occasions where it shows up
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